各位学霸们好,今天黄老师跟大家分享一下本周六(2021.11.6)雅思大作文真题范文 解析,本周考题如下:
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本周考题及分析
More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people, news and events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
这道题也属于经典题重现了,social media Internet是一个非常重要的母话题,同学们一定要针对该类题目积累足够多的观点库和地道词组(可以参照黄老师的《雅培英语大作文范文 2020-2021》来进行积累,需要的学霸可以找黄老师免费领取哦)
另外,对于这道题的问题类型‘优点是否大于缺点’,同学们需要注意以下几点:
1.因为问题中的advantages disadvantages都有复数,所以同学们必须优缺点各写至少2个点(原理参加黄老师之前视频《剑桥考官解析大作文分段》)
2.outweigh需要同学们把优缺点进行比较,有下列两种方式:
-优点*3 + 缺点*2 / 缺点*3 + 优点*2(多的多写一个点)
-优点*2 + 缺点*2 + 结尾段写一个比较句(为什么优点/缺点更重要)
一般情况下,黄老师都是推荐第二种写法的,因为第一种写法需要同学们写5个点,这样考试的时候压力会很大。而第二种写法只需要在最后一段写一个相对固定的比较句就能拿到这道题的outweigh分数了。
那么,带着上面这些要点,我们一起来看范文吧!
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范文鉴赏
2021.11.6真题
More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people, news and events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
满分词汇:
access / inaccessible v./adj. 接触/无法接触
current affairs n. 最新资讯
展开全文
in the globe prep. 世界各地
privilege n. 特权
up-to-date adj. 实时的
selectively subscribe v. 选择性订阅
minors n. 青少年
misguide v. 误导
positively informative adj.能提供正面信息的
discretion n. 审慎
hate comments n.喷子言论
论点1:Mass media allows the public to have access to current affairs in the globe, which used to be a privilege for only social elites a century ago.
展开1: Compared with information spreading in the past, which were normally inaccessible by ordinary people, people nowadays can acquire virtually any up-to-date news using no more than a mobile device, or even selectively subscribe to their favorite ones in various mass media platforms.
论点2:It is normal for the general public, especially minors, to be misguided by the information delivered by mass media.
展开2:Although most of mass media is positively informative, underage audiences, who rarely have any discretion, are easily to fall victim to some of the misleading information from mass media, such as commercials or hate comments on Internet media.
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